brotherGeo

Hello Comrade! Welcome to YWS. I like this prologue, it is short and simple, gets the characters introduced and delivers the plot in an excellent cliffhanger. Your Writing is really ...

Hello comrade! Wow, I relate to this poem on a whole other level. Life really is just ticking away, the days and years are shorter, the expectations of others has ...

Hello Comrade! I won’t lie to you, this is pretty difficult to read. I know it’s a draft and needs a lot of work but like @BEASTtheHUN the flow is ...

Hello Comrade! Long time no review Harry, How are you been. Just finished catching up with this series, and man is it one hell of a rollercoaster. Anyway on with ...

Hello Comrade! Its been a while since ive done any reviewing so forgive me if I forget to mention anything. Lets get on with it shall we. First impression: I ...

Hello comrade! Apologies for the late review, but better late than never right? Anyway we have a decent deathclaw fight here, i feel like if it was real thats how ...

Hello Comrade! Concord, the most well visited place in the game. Also i see how your changing characters slightly, now dogmeat is called sadie. anyway on with the review. Just ...

Hello Comrade! Another part in the fallout fanfic I see. The iconic exit from 111. I wonder how you'll write making an entire collapsed house revert ,into what 40 steel ...

Hello comrade! Jacobs escape from vault 111 was much more emotional and interesting than the usual rush to get out. Also nice job adding scavenging details, one of my favroute ...

Hello Comrade! Ah yes I remember playing through this scene hundreds of times over, The silver pompaudor, Mr Kellog cereal. I also liked how you changed the characters names like ...

Hello comrade! Its nice seeing a prolougue for this series, gives us a bit on exposition on what to come. excellent. Anyway on with the review: A humanoid figure gazed ...

Hello Comrade! It was me who dragged you here, my friend. Anyways on with the review! Chapter one The boy and the demon This is problematic, at first i wasn't ...

Hello Comrade! It's good to see the continuation of this story. However i am as you suspect a little confused as to whats going on. I will read the chapter ...

Hello Comrade! Another action filled chapter, good keeps us on our toes. Dialogue was a little lacking in this and as IcyFlame said your character dialogue isn't super indistinguishable. but ...

Hello Comrade! Another chapter that is really short. its sharp and good but just a little too short. You have really good buildups, these demons and balrogs Blaze is about ...