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  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: True Love

    Thank you for reviewing and I'm sorry to hear about your ex. Me and mine that I wrote this poem about dated for a while and found out that we ...

    Apr 4, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: True Love

    thankyou so much I am going to seperate it into stanzas and edit it soon but I posted it late last night and was too tired to edit it but ...

    Apr 4, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: isolation

    I found this to be a really good poem. My favorite part would have to be the middle of it. For a review I would suggest that you make it ...

    Apr 2, 2019
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Us

    Thank you so much, and yeah it was kind of a longer poem. Not even going to lie I was scared to post it cause of how much meant it ...

    Apr 2, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Stuck

    Thankyou for reviewing and as for the rhyme scheme I wrote this in a minute just based on the thoughts in my head. When I normally write poems they just ...

    Apr 1, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Receding Tide

    I feel like I understand it and your theme is to be washed away from all the worlds problems and pain into a dreamless sleep where you don't have to ...

    Apr 1, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Stuck

    Thank you so much for reviewing and I'm not exactly sure but I have heard that phrase be used a lot where I am from so I am just used ...

    Apr 1, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health Re: That Boy

    Apr 1, 2019


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