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Re: The Eyes
Brittany here to review. First off, in the first sentence you spelled "penetrate" wrong. I don't quite understand where the blue comes in but okay lol have a good night. ...
Sun Feb 24, 2013 5:59 am -
Re: The Sailor
Hello, Brittany here to review. I think you had great imagery :) it is as if I was there with the sailor as he spoke to me. I like your ...
Sun Feb 24, 2013 5:31 am -
Re: Nothing
I agree with Wherethewindgoes said. It would be a lot better written as a poem :) but you have good descriptive words:D very interesting to read too!
Fri Feb 22, 2013 4:19 pm -
Re: All About Me
Brittany Hello! Honestly, I also couldn't get into this poem. I think that the poem is... I don't know how to explain but yeah.
Mon May 23, 2011 4:43 pm -
Re: Lost Love
Hey buddies. I was wondering if you would please review this and tell me what you think,Please? Brittany!
Wed Mar 23, 2011 7:14 pm -
Re: Romance scene.
Yepp, no problem!!
Tue Jul 13, 2010 7:46 pm -
Re: you
lol thanks! :D
Mon Jul 12, 2010 6:14 pm -
Re: you
now this is not a quick THROW AWAY note to someone...when you write something like this you dont just throw it away, therefore your basically saying its not even worth ...
Mon Jul 12, 2010 2:52 pm