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Brittany
Hello! Honestly, I also couldn't get into this poem. I think that the poem is... I don't know how to explain but yeah.
Hello there =]. I will have to be honest, and say that this isn't my favorite. Not that it wasn't good, I just wasn't feeling it. The rhythm jumped a lot. I did like however, that if you read it from bottom to top, that it changed the message. That was really neat. =] But I think overall, the poem had a nice structure, nice sound, beat, etc. Nice work =]
Wow. That's all I can say! I am really speechless. The poem was able to connect with me and as a reader that is gravely important. But, the amazing thing is, you did it TWICE! With the same piece of writing! That is truly remarkable and I am VERY, very happy that you are still here today to share this work and I look forward to more!
-Amnien
That was really good... It very nearly made me cry. And sadly, that was probably because I realized that I think more like the poem going top to bottom... I really need to change my point of view. I thought it was really neat how you could read it bottom to top and the meaning would be totally opposite. The feeling you put into the poem is so real and easy to relate with. Keep writing, that was an amazing poem!