britishwannabe

this is utter amazingness! i love the metaphor and how its kept through out the whole poem instead of just for one line or stanza. and we were just talking ...

ok i found this really interesting because its one of those poems with a twist ending. i love the love affair metephor its really smart and i love how you ...

this was really good except the chicken and rice didnt fit. it did rhyme but in a poem its more important to make sence and have it all connect then ...

this is just amazing

i love how this is a poem but also like a letter. it helps show your emotions

i related to this poem and i bet a lot of people did to which makes the poem more real, i like how you picked a topic people could easily ...

its nice and simple and to the point. and i like how the beginning is almost the same

this is really good! its simple but if you look deeper its got a good message. i love you metephors they really brought it together

this is really good and it made me think, i got lost in the words and was sad when it was over keep writing you have natural talent

this is really good, it really made me think and consider what you said

this is really really real! i felt like it was happening to me it actually made me shudder. did this happen to you? because it was real and flowed so ...

this poem flows really well, i could read it through very easily

its really cute and even from when you were seven you can tell you had great potential! now i wanna read your new stuff! keep writing

this is really good! i really got into this poem you have natural talent

i really like your metiphors in lines 2 and 3