briggsy1996

This was great! I found myself smiling toward the end because this describes me accurately! I think many of us find joy or comfort in tedious (or random?) tasks when ...

Wow! My soul is singing! I adore this, really! (Sorry, the music nerd in me is showing.) The way you open this poem sets the tone in such a flawless ...

This is so sweet and sentimental! Maybe it's because I can truly relate to this right now, but it really hit a soft spot for me. I hope you share ...

Hey, this was really nice! As I read the first line, I was thinking along the lines of earthquakes, a hungry person… and then the second line left me confused ...

Hey, this is great! The imagery and use of metaphors creates a great picture of what you're saying. You also have a vivid voice speaking throughout, which give this poem ...

Hey, I love, love, love the first few paragraphs. The description of your friend Chris sets a great image and I was really getting into the writing. However I feel ...

Hey, I really liked this. You definitely answered the prompt while reminding me, the reader, the risks of texting while driving. The way you write provides a really meaningful visual ...

Love this, it's really gutsy! I'd tweak the "took" or "will" in the 3rd verse, because the switch from past tense to present tense is a little confusing, but I ...

Hi there, I love this! It's so sad, but it's eloquently written, and has a certain sophistication to it. You're descriptions are dead on- the perfect amount. Suffering doesn’t know ...

Hi there, I...wow, I can't think of proper words to describe how much I enjoyed this! You got me right off the bat with the piano and their little music ...

Hi there, This was interesting and ... amusing? to read. Not that the content was amusing, but the repetitive words were. It brought to life the inner workings of this ...

Hi there, Overall, I liked it. It all came together in the end, and had a very real quality to it. What I might suggest is lengthening it, and adding ...

Hi there, this has a very... magical, feel about it. For the majority of it, it all seemed very fluffy and nonchalant- good though, for a prologue. The ending though, ...

Hi there! There was something so... smooth about you're poem. It was very fluent; easy to read. You have some good metaphors and the way you've written this is very ...

Hi there! I love your poem- it is so sad but brilliantly written. It was very memorable, in my mind, for several reasons. The imagery was accurate and meaningful, and ...