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Haha, I must say that this piece made me laugh. A love story involving food, yum! Lol. But I guess you can make this into a full-blown short story or ...

hey george man, yeah this is a random story and i think it has quite a potential to be a full-blown story, ya know the standard number of words to ...

Hiya poet, I like this poem, reminds of dickinson's.your lines are relatiel short than the conventional and not much rhyming at the end, although i find it quite appealing. this ...

Hi Layla, your account of your bestfriend's abuse is heroic and commendable. anyway, on the technicals: this is a narrative exposition of Jenny's story through your eyes. alhtough generally, non-ficti

hiya smashles, first of all, this is a nice story, and i think you should continue working on this as this has a lt of potentials. alhtough i foind it ...

what i liked with this poem was the resonance of the nature's sounds Thump thump thump The edge, Push off Air whistling around me Splash Down down down it creates ...

hiya tranquility, nice title, it was what caught my attention first, i think that it was quite intriguing so i plunge on. although i am not of poem-person, i find ...

hi hiadel here are my nitpicks: "... starring into the face of a pig" staring? "...he was laying on" lying? "Exiting the jail area through those doors Lazaro found" doors, ...

there wasn't any conflict yet, although your general description of the setting is quite impressive and i think you are also developing your characters fine. you did your research and ...

I think that you have posted this one too prematurely. there was no conflict yet and i was thinking "so what then?" although your introduction of the characters are commendable, ...

I am not a sucker for romantic stories but i think this was really good. you got a style and it kept me hook til the end. that was a ...

hiya, first stop, it is nice that you considered putting a caveat at the start, to ward off people who might have misinterpreted this piece. second, this was explicitly written ...

Hiyah Makar, I think this could do a little polishing. Review is a piece of literature that should be coherent and most of the times concise. You have made an ...

This quite good for a "ten-minuter". It dwells on critical issue that everybody seemed to be afraid of discussing, yes the birds and the bumblebees. Well the point is your ...

Yo, i am not quite a fan of history but i like your story. if history's gonna be taught this way at school, i might stand a chance winning the ...