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Hi Mageheart! I'm definitely not skilled at reviews, but I shall attempt lol. First off, I really like your idea using a credit card as a metaphor in your poem. ...

Hi! I absolutely love this poem. I feel like it could be used as a metaphor for many different situations. For me, I see it as the loss of a ...

Hi! First of, I thought your story was really well written. While my overall understanding of the context is rather minimal, you placed enough in so that the story made ...

Hi! I really enjoyed your poem. Some observations that I made: You repeated the title (which is also the metaphor of the poem) "The scroll that is history" on the ...

Hi :) I really liked this story. It is such a sad piece, and super short. I like how you were able to portray such strong emotions within a this ...

Hi! I must say this was not at all what I was expecting when I clicked on the title, but I’m pleasantly surprised. This is a very interesting poem, while ...

Hi! First of all, I'm no expert in poetry myself, but I thought I'd give some of my thoughts anyways. You can take it with a grain of salt. I ...

Hi! First of all, love this. Your topic is one of great interest. I like how you contrast it to "the darkness and the light'. Later on in the poem ...

I'm rather new to this site, so bare with me i haven't got a lot of experience with reviews lol. I love how you interwove a underling theme/symbol within the ...

Wow. I love the emotion conveyed through your words. "when you smile instead of crying" is a very relatable line in my opinion. I think that many tend to hide ...