bluewaterlily

Thank you so much missmezza. :) Glad you enjoyed my poem.

Thank you for your honesty JayShay. You're right. I did use the same words twice. I will fix that, and see if I can clean up my metaphors. No hurt ...

Abstract but I like it. Just add more stanzas to it

Lovely poem Karin. :) As always. And keep writing more poems or I will have to take away your chocolate and haunt you for all eternity. Mwuhaha *smiles innocently and ...

Hi Solvy. :) Congrats on being featured. You deserve it. I just wanted to tell you that I love your story. Your characters are nutty, but that's what makes them ...

This is awesome, Qara Bear! And Lily is awesome, if I do say so myself. :P Please write more and upload it soon before I explode! < 3

Right lol I forgot.:) But you both did a good job.

Solvy and Qara this was awesome! You've got to write more poetry together! Keep up the good work. :D

This was beautifully written. Sorry, I'm not help, but I don't have anything to say about improving it. Good job with it. Can't wait to see more of your work. ...

Aww thanks Annie.

Thanks for the reviews. Glad you liked my poem. :)

That's awesome, Dragon. Very clever. *Huggles*

Thanks for the review, Toe.

Thanks, Lily. :D I'm glad you liked my poem. Thanks for reviewing it, It was real sweet of you. :D