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Hi, Lavvie. Bluewaterlily here to review. :) Firstly I love the first sentence and the tone you establish in the first paragraph, slightly wry, sardonic and yet intriguing. It almost ...

Hi, hunrith. I am bluewaterlily and here to review Hexamon. First of all, before I even I started reading, I noticed your story is a huge block of large paragraphs. ...

Hi, bluewaterlily to review. Firstly I would like to say awesome username. Now onto the actual review. Also, you have a very good first sentence to establish the story. I ...

Hey Solvy :) First of all I want to say how psyched I am that this is your first poem in two whole years. About time already :P. S. Love ...

Hi, Roundsquare. Here as requested. So I guess I will start off with the opening paragraph. Well you certainly have an interesting introductory sentence. I really enjoyed the description of ...

Hello Ariana. Bluewaterlily to review your piece. Judging from the other reviews you got, it seems like a lot was covered, so I hope this review doesn't sound repetitive. The ...

Hi Angel. ^^ I am so sorry this review is so late. But finally I am here. :wink: Just to warn you, I am a little out of practice, so ...

Hey Elizabeth. :) Here as promised. Sorry this review is super late. Firstly I want to talk about the formatting. I agree with Kyllorac. Your story was good but it ...

Hey Ish. :) Firstly, I'd like to say I loved this chapter. You wrote it very well. Now onto the few nitpicks. I noticed a few spelling errors. His legs ...

Hi Katarina. I just want to say that this is a wonderful poem. The imagery is beautiful and so is the way you wrote this poem. Sorry I don't have ...

Hi Scarlet. :) Here as requested. I probably won't go into too much depth since you've already gotten so many good reviews, but I'll do my best to give you ...

Hi Tamara. :) Sorry for the late review. When you wake in the morning's rush I think wake would sound better as awake. But other than that your poem was ...

Hi Knightly. :) I saw you posted and after reading this I decided to review your poem. I wish the stardust in our souls Will shine with all it’s might ...

Hey Ura. Finally I'm here to review your story. Sorry for the delay, by the way. Anwyn swallowed her nausea forced herself to not look away. Forced should be forcing. ...

Solvy this was good. :) Like for example, that one day my boyfriend was ignoring me. I told him that the mall's security guard was following me around after saying ...