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i usually become somewhat physically ill with romantic stuff (it's complicated) but this was honestly so lovely, glad i braved it out lol leave it to me to find a ...

This is really lovely! I wish I was better equipped to review your poems, but alas, I'm aromantic and can only really observe. Keep writing!

I'm happy to help!

I'm glad you pointed that out. The lines are just long enough that you can't comfortably read multiple in one breath, either.

Awesome!

No problem, glad I could help!

i saw this in the spotlight and... wow... as someone who's struggles with suicidal thoughts in the past, this hit almost too hard in the best way. well done, and ...

Alright, I'll keep that in mind! Glad you liked it :D

Thank you for your suggestions! It's pretty infuriating that these experiences are commmonplace for folks like you and I, but I'm glad you found meaning in my poem.

Thank you for the review! It's pretty vauge on purpose, but I definitely could take it a little further. I'll keep your suggestions in mind.

Thank you for the review! I have the quotes italicized now, so hopefully that's a little easier to interpret. There are also some minor adjustments to help convey the emotions ...

Ah!!! Thank you so much, I wish I had gotten around to reading your reveiw sooner! I'm really glad you enjoyed this lil poem of mine :D!

Thank you for the review! I'm glad people are able to find meaning outside the context of the original work.

Thank you! Those interpretations deviate from my intentions, but I'm glad you enjoyed it and found meaning.