bludragon525

Hey! Blu here! W-o-w. That was really good. You gave the perfect amount of information to the upcoming story, but left us hanging all the same. In the tiniest corner ...

Hey, empress! Sorry for the wait. Well, it looks like everyone's already nit-picked their way through, so I'll just move on. Your beginning was a little wordy. Which was odd, ...

Hey! Hm. It's a little too short for me to make anything of it. It does feel like we've heard it before in some book or newspaper article that we've ...

Blu here, as promised! Cool story! I would definitely buy it if it were published. :) Okay, I am going to say this as simply as I can. Stop abusing ...

Hey! Blu here! Nice poem! But... I felt you could use some punctuation. Not all poems have it, but in your case, it would definitely help. but you'd come back ...

Hey! I like it. It's ironic, and it woke me up from homework, so, great job on that part! I do agree with In silico. You need to add some ...

Hey! Nice work, t! :D Nit-picks We are, The defender of dark. No comma after "are". Defenders' is plural. Keeping it at bay, Fighting till the end. I'm not sure ...

Hey! Nice poem! But... I do agree with everybody else. You need a little more punctuation, and your spacing was just... weird. It made me pause in the middle of ...

Hey empress! Ha! I finally found time to do your review, yay! First off, I loved this! Your writing made me cringe several times, which doesn't happen often. *shudders* Especially ...

Hey! I liked this. The message was nice, and I've never really seen a poem like this before. It's new, and that's what I like about it. I did notice ...

Hey pudin! Okay, first thing I noticed were your spelling mistakes. You cleared most of them up, but you did miss a few. For example, twiligt should be twilight . ...

Hey! I think this poem has a ton of potential. You have a very cool idea, you just need to sort out your ideas a little more and make them ...

Hey! This was really good! Your descriptions were amazing, and I loved the way you introduced the characters. I only found one mistake, which was in your very first sentence. ...

Hey lily! Here's my review for you! Nitpicks “But Nana, can’t you just be born with so much good that you can never be evil ? Like fairies or princesses ...

Hey! Hm. It's pretty good, for a poem written on the spot. I would suggest switching some of the lines, though, so it would go something like this: I listen. ...