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  • Poetry » General, General Re: My Phenomenal Mother

    Hey Ejay1806, To begin with,i like how you describe little things about your mother. As a child myself,it describe most of what i feel too. "as soft as Dove" that ...

    Aug 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: To Buddha Land

    Hello audy, i love how u express it. when u said candy floss and blossom trees,all i could imagine is the soft soothing feeling i get. "toothless wide smiles" ? ...

    Aug 15, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: The Fox

    Hey! Something really unexpected when i first saw the title. I don't know how to explain my feelings when I'm reading this but I really enjoyed this piece of yours. ...

    Nov 13, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Reflection

    Hi! I love this piece of work you do. You describe the character well enough. But I was expecting more of it,actually. Maybe this is just your epic beginning to ...

    Nov 13, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Never Say Gone

    Hi. I love this piece of yours. You put a great descriptions in it.(that i failed to do it) Your story is breathtaking that i feel like i am in ...

    Oct 14, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Dark Faith - Page 1

    Hello. I don't know what to say. To me, this story got a very beautiful character in it. You tell us quite something about her. But maybe put in something ...

    Oct 14, 2013
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Madness

    Hey! This is my little review for you. First of all, i like your plot and your writting styles. When i first read your story i thought 'what is this? ...

    May 30, 2013
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: I Live in Binary Worlds

    hello there, Im not good in this things but i just wanted to say that you make up my day. i was so boring a minute ago and your story ...

    May 27, 2013


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