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  • Poetry » General, General Re: My Phenomenal Mother

    Hey Ejay1806, To begin with,i like how you describe little things about your mother. As a child myself,it describe most of what i feel too. "as soft as Dove" that ...

    Aug 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: To Buddha Land

    Hello audy, i love how u express it. when u said candy floss and blossom trees,all i could imagine is the soft soothing feeling i get. "toothless wide smiles" ? ...

    Aug 15, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: The Fox

    Hey! Something really unexpected when i first saw the title. I don't know how to explain my feelings when I'm reading this but I really enjoyed this piece of yours. ...

    Nov 13, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Reflection

    Hi! I love this piece of work you do. You describe the character well enough. But I was expecting more of it,actually. Maybe this is just your epic beginning to ...

    Nov 13, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Never Say Gone

    Hi. I love this piece of yours. You put a great descriptions in it.(that i failed to do it) Your story is breathtaking that i feel like i am in ...

    Oct 14, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Dark Faith - Page 1

    Hello. I don't know what to say. To me, this story got a very beautiful character in it. You tell us quite something about her. But maybe put in something ...

    Oct 14, 2013
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Madness

    Hey! This is my little review for you. First of all, i like your plot and your writting styles. When i first read your story i thought 'what is this? ...

    May 30, 2013
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: I Live in Binary Worlds

    hello there, Im not good in this things but i just wanted to say that you make up my day. i was so boring a minute ago and your story ...

    May 27, 2013


Every time I’ve gotten feedback that was hard to take it was usually hard to take because there was truth in it and I didn’t like that (or didn’t want to receive it). That’s not to say all harsh feedback is good or that we should be harsh for harshness’ sake, but learning to absorb truth without letting it break your inner core/break you is a lifelong skill that keeps your mind elastic and open to learning.
— soundofmind