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oh, i know its not fantasy fiction but it will be convorted to ff soon (ff : fantasy fiction)

Cheers for the reviews poor imp and roaming shadow, it really made my day. If youve got annything you want reviewed just pm the blob.

Thanks , I thought this story was dead. To Torpid:I might continue it after i finish what im currently working On, but for now ill just let it die off ...

Oh and i just remembered , the person who had a telephone for an avater , you wrote loads for a review too so same goes for yoo, ( thankyou).

BlOODY MOOSE! , cheers jigsaw! , ( message for fishr, i know you wrote more feed back but i didnt want to freak you cause this is how i usually ...

like it!ten times better than the last.

right ill change that . ill also take some time to improve it. thanks for the comments :)

im sorry for using the c.r.a.p word but im going through the worst writers block ever and my work just seems like a jumble of poo no matter how i ...

i know im a terrible writer but thanks for bieng honest ( i know you didnt mestion annything about me bieng terrible) next time ill take more time making sence ...

It....dosent make .....sence... . Nice poem. :D must eat chair....

Whoa!, firstly thankyou, i think youve just changed my style completly ( but in a very good way) all your tips got me thinking about how complicated litracy is, And ...

This was weird , this isnt your normal style. ITs still good though. You managed to tell a whole story of eveloution but keep it interesting, but i do suggest ...

DEAR LORD!, thank you duskglimmer!,you must of spent ages doin this, and i dont take it lightly. I hearby vow to review anything you write(that i know of) within the ...

I cant master spell check , its like a bloody goat but with feathers

thankyou for bieng truthfull, it wasnt acctually a dream , he woke up in Haven . but ill take your advice and edit it out