blacktiger3915

I just wanted to say congrats to the seniors! I hope every one of you have a great future. I'm proud of all of you!

Thank you Cat. I wrote the poem on how I would say it. I really don't speak proper. I have a southern acsent.

Honestly I don't know.....

I know, I didn't like this story, that's why I stopped a very long time ago. But did you read Chapter 1? It did say that she was getting raped.

I didn't think the poem was that bad, but it didn't give a lot of details to the reader. i think if you have a little more time with this, ...

i have to agree with....................Eimear!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Don't ask me why I did that). I liked the poem...different. Feliz Cinco de Mayo!!!!!!!!!!!!

I like writing sonnets and I enjoyed reading this. I thought it was creative and well thought out. Good job and keep writing!

It really wasn't apart of the poem, I wanted to hear everybody's opinion if they wanted to hear or not. I'll probably take it out of the poem.

The poem was great. At the same time I was sad and moved. You did a great job with this.

This was a very sweet and nice poem. Very refreshing to read. Good job and keep writing!

I'm with everyone else on this, it was an okay poem. I think with a little more time, this would be a good piece.

Wow, excellant work. The last line was fantastic. Great job and keep writing!

I really liked this. It was very creative! I love Easter! I haven't been Easter egg hunting in a long time. You brought back so many memories!

Thanks everyone!

I can't wait to read it!!!!!!! Hey.....you sit across from me in class 4th period don't you? :smt005