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oo i really like this. very nice. short, sweet, to the point and well structured. well done the only bit i was a little unsure of was... 'to grow to ...

this was really beautifully written. :) the point you made is so clear and well thought out. it was such a touching piece of writing. sweet, lovely and delicate, not ...

ok a lot of the technical stuff has been taken care of! so i will review from a readers point of view looking at this for the first time i ...

this is a nice little piece, i like your idea however there a few things i want to point out... 1) possible typing errors in beginning. 2) also in fourth ...

i think the length is perfect. :) the poems rhyme is very good , the point is well brought across and the rhythm is good. :) i just think that ...

fistly, very well done i love the bit about high school. it is so true that people split up into various different groups.! (i can think of a few examples!) ...

coool. short, sweet and very meaninful. one thing i would say is that it is a little cliched (i think) but i understand that that cant be helped and tbh, ...

WOw, first review goes to me :) Firstly, hi. I really loved this piece. :) it was great and really straight to the point which i like in a poem. ...

FIrstly, great work :) there are some really nice aspects to this. lets get the tips out the way... 1) try not to repeat dark in the first few lines ...

ok, firstly, this was well written. The beginning was especially good and drew the reader in :) great work. a start always needs to be successful :) just a few ...

i really liked this! you captured some amazing feeling and things to think about were commonly told your rhyming is lovely and it really works with the piece. the reader ...

i really liked this evie it was sweet and cleverly done i must say! i personally cannot write anything of the sort as haikus are very difficult . OR ARE ...

wow, i agree with natalie; the way the anger came throo was fab! you may not write happy poems but your good at what you do! :) great work i ...

hey, no need to be nervous! you have a talent. this was a very well written and thought out poem. :) great work! there are some amazing lines in this ...

I think you have chosen a good topic to work with :) there are some brilliant lines in here with a clear message attatched. for example i love these lines... ...