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Hey deliroast! Time to open my judgemental eyes and wreak some wrath! I saw your post on the forums about this story and I decided I wanted to check it ...

Hey David! Browsing through the humor section of works, I stumbled upon your little gem here. In short, I thought this was excellent! Took a while to put together what ...

Hey Dasia! I'm not much of a poetry person, but this poem was fantastic. A very common, intriguing topic and you shine a good light on it. You use good ...

Hey Antha First off, welcome to YWS! It's a great place for guidance. Alright, on to your work. The piece is pretty interesting, as insomnia can be a pretty scary ...

Hey Treaver! This short story you have here could serve well as a feature. The overall story is pretty interesting, and there is alot you could do with it. Focusing ...

Hey Reckoner! This story is really interesting. I like how you used the small shed as a location for this eerie thing that would start your continuing story, which i ...

Hello again Silent! Your story continues to be action packed to the rim. And this time it gets better and fits more dynamic with the story. But, there still isn't ...

Hello Silent! First off, this could be a really interesting story. With a nationwide or perhaps even global event happening, the perspective of a small town and it's inhabitants can ...

Hola Gringo! Continuing where I left off, sure took me long enough. It was a summer day like any other. School was out, the birds were singing, the trees and ...

Hey Picard! Welcome to YWS, hope you enjoy yourself here. Overall, this is an okay piece. I like the scene you are describing, and if you fix up grammatical errors, ...

Hey Mrs. Damon! You got an interesting story going here. I love stories like these, where darkness is everywhere and there is only one hope. You portray the common traits ...

Hey Random writer 001. I have to say, i came here for the humor tag because I love getting a good laugh. To that end, I've become quite well known ...

Hola Gringo! First off, this will not teach me how to kill wizards? That is disappointing mate ;) Now, I love some good humor and this story you got going ...

Hey Ryis! This is a very well written short piece. There is alot of good descriptions of the surroundings and what is going on. Your character's thoughts are well put ...

Hey Ben! First off; I love this story. As a lover of sci-fi I really see alot of potential and interesting stuff in this short. You excel at describing the ...