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Hey Olive! Before I'll give some thoughts on this; Welcome to YWS! You seem to have settled in well ;) Will only do a quick overview, as I mainly liked ...

Hey Sylvia! First off, welcome to YWS! Secondly, I was going to do a quick overview of your work, but reading about how you don't mind harsh reviews, I'll go ...

Hey Strangelove! Alright, are you going to tell me how to stop worrying and just love the bomb? Oh, no, this is another classic title reference. I love it. Now, ...

Hey NightWalker! Blood hunters and soul hunters. Pretty interesting stuff. That aside, your story, despite its short length, has quite a few problems. I'll go over what I found lacking ...

Hey Legible! First off, since you are relatively new: Welcome to YWS ;) Alright, I was actually going to skip this chapter, as Vyper did such a thorough review. But ...

Hey Val! Doing a quick review of your first entry, beware! Alright, I'm not sure if you tagged this wrong or if its actually a short story. This seems like ...

Hey Mandrake! I don't have all too much to say, but I'll comment anyhow, seeing as I really loved it. This was indeed really fun! You do action scenes very ...

Hey again Gringo! Alright, finally back to finish what I started. I don't have all the much to say, as you continue doing what you have been doing for the ...

Hey Marde! Stranded on a desert island, that's always exciting. It gives oppurtunities to portray strange, lush and dangerous environments as well as great character development. However, the story yo

Hey Questio(n)! Zombies are pretty awesome, to the point of them now being kinda run of the mill. I've never read a zombie story on YWS though, and I'm hoping ...

Hey Disk! I'm shooting for a quick review here. Well, I had to read this story several times to get a good overview of it and understand what exactly was ...

Hey peanut! I consider myself quite the cinephile, to the point of also having read quite a few screenplays and toyed around with the idea of writing one myself. Now, ...

Hey maleficent! Well, this sounded pretty interresting and its going to be tricky reviewing this as I found your other work practically spotless. But we'll give it a shot! First ...

Hey Legend! I love science fiction, so obviously I was drawn to this piece. Now, this work does have a lot of issues though. Namely, it's very small and filled ...

Hey skorlir! First off, if you deliberately made almost the entire piece a giant wall of text , then I will award you extra props. Alright, now aside from the ...