birdsfly97

Hello Scout, and welcome to YWS! Firstly, I really, really liked your poem. Your diction is fantastic, and the structure really emphasizes a great rhythm throughout the piece. I have ...

Review: Pros: - Amazing and effective imagery - Loved your similes and personification - Effective structure - I really thought that your choice of topic was interesting and fit well ...

Wow. Wow. Wow. Your imagery and passion shines through in every single line of this poem, I was very, very, impressed. I think that my favorite lines were definitely: "I ...

Wow! I absolutely loved your writing!! I was very intrigued by your personalization of the raindrops and how you were able to connect this to real life situations. Perhaps the ...

I love this poem! I loved how you combined knowledge and creativity throughout your piece. In addition, I thought that your analogies and imagery was very effective in trying to ...

Wow, this is absolutely incredible. Your imagery and symbolism was effective and made the reader feel as though they were standing there right next to you. No criticisms whatsoever. I ...

This piece is incredible, obviously you have great talent for writing. Each line is very descriptive and intriguing in such a way that makes the reader feel as though they ...

This poem is incredible, and really displays your talent for writing. I think that a lot of young writers can easily connect to your topic, which makes it a great ...