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Re: Past Hope chp. 3
Hey, great job on this chapter! I haven't read the other chapters, so if I miss anything not reviewed in previous chapters, just ignore. I'll review in order of reading! ...
Jan 27, 2019 -
Re: The Beauty of the Unknown: Chapter 1 - In the Beginning
Hey! This is a great start to your story! I really enjoyed is and it immediately caught my attention. If I seem harsh at all during my review, know that ...
Dec 6, 2018 -
Re: The Fighter and the Dragon Chapter 2
Sorry that this took so long. I've been extremely busy. If I sound harsh at all during this, I'm sorry I can come off that way, but it's not my ...
Nov 29, 2018 -
Re: A young spy and a young cop-chapter 5
Hey again! I'm loving the creativity of this story! "The evening of June 14th, party night. Natalie, now Madeline Brant, stood in front of the mansion, wearing an evening party ...
Nov 13, 2018 -
Re: The Lies of The Fallen (Draft of Chapter 1)
Hey, I really enjoy this story! I'll give my reviews in the order in which they come. If I sound harsh I'm sorry, it is not my intention. "The sun ...
Nov 13, 2018 -
Re: Different
I love this! I'm not too great at poem or reviewing them for that matter, but I'll try if I can. First, I really love the rhythm of this poem. ...
Nov 10, 2018 -
Re: A young spy and a young cop-Chapter 4
Hey! This story is great and I can't wait to read the rest! This is just my opinion and you are welcome to do whatever you want with it. Mine ...
Nov 10, 2018 -
Re: A young spy and a young cop Chapter 3
Hey! This story is great and I can't wait to read the rest! This is just my opinion and you are welcome to do whatever you want with it. Mine ...
Nov 10, 2018 -
Re: A young spy and a young cop Chapter 2
Hey! This story is great and I can't wait to read the rest! This is just my opinion and you are welcome to do whatever you want with it. Mine ...
Nov 10, 2018 -
Re: A young spy and a young cop
Hey! This story is great and I can't wait to read the rest! This is just my opinion and you are welcome to do whatever you want with it. Mine ...
Nov 10, 2018 -
Re: Jigsaw Jumble
I'm loving this story so far! So, as I do with all of the works I love, I'm going to review it! "THE HOURGLASS TURNS SO DOES MY LIFE" This ...
Nov 9, 2018 -
Re: Eyes On You
Wow! This it great! I'm going to kinda give my reviews in order in which I read them. The first paragraph really grabs my attention and encourages me to keep ...
Nov 8, 2018 -
Re: The ghost from rumble cafe part 1
Hey, I love the creativity of this piece! Quick suggestion, whenever another person begins talking, start a new paragraph. It helps the reader to not be as overwhelmed as to ...
Nov 8, 2018 -
Re: Lattices in Lace
I love this poem! It has great rhythm and symbolism. I find myself wishing that it kept going forever, which is extremely difficult to find in writers especially in poems. ...
Nov 8, 2018 -
Re: When time glitches
Hey! I extremely like this story. I found myself laughing through this story. I also liked the foreshadowing that occured at the end. It allowed me to remember this story ...
Nov 8, 2018