bhoomi5

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I like the way the paragraphs have been distributed and the way they give a particular sound when you read it. The comparison taken, of the girl and the bird, ...

Yes, I have noticed that in my writings, but I lag a bit in the dialogue paragraph things and am working on it so yeah.. But ThankYou

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Hey I see that you remembered to distribute your poetry into paragraphs and that is a good thing because paragraphing gives more effect. the hurt is so obvious and so ...

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Hey I see that you remembered to distribute your poetry into paragraphs and that is a good thing because paragraphing gives more effect. the hurt is so obvious and so ...

There is mystery all over. it would've been better if you would've shown/described what all of them are grieving/trying to forget, so that the reader isn't confused and knows what ...

Oh my God! I am so glad you know how I feel, and the questions you put towards the end just describe how I feel. I will work on it ...

ThankYou! And yes, I don't think I did the editing very efficiently.

ThankYou for pointing out my mistakes and helping me become a better writer

Heyy I read that its your first work and the first thing I want to say is that, this is so good, it is just amazing. I really like the ...

I really appreciate your review and honestly, it made me feel a 100 times more confident about my work. ThankYou So Much Stay Blessed -B.

I really like the way you have put your words, try to formulate them into paragraphs, it would sound better :)