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This poem is very good for a third grader to write. I don't see any spelling mistakes. The line breaks seem to be random and make to poem chunky. It's ...

It might just be me but I think this poem lacks emotion and just tells a story in a poem format. I get what you're telling your reader, you love ...

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This has too much told not enough show. What do the cats look like? Who is the child? Describe the how she felt don't say how she felt. There is ...

This has too much told not enough show. What do the cats look like? Who is the child? Describe the how she felt don't say how she felt. There is ...

I really don't understand what you mean to say in the poem. It's really descriptive and your word chose is good. The line breaks seem to have no meaning and ...

What words did he use to break your heart? Why were you his enemy? Those are two questions that fill my mind when I read this poem. There are much ...

This poem is very relatable and easy to understand for students. What are the * for? If it's for the break in thought then you could start a new stanza. ...

This poem's title has nothing to do with the poem. The poem's text is hard to read so you might lose readers because of that. The poem really makes you ...

This poem as good imagery and personification but it has no connection with the first and last lines. It's pretty and reads smooth but you're leaving your readers confused about ...

This is a very plane poem and it feels very nonpersonnel and withdrawn. I'm the type of person who thinks that the best way to make an impression on your ...

This is a good but sad poem. Thanks for sharing this with us. It's good they way it is but to really get a good reaction out of the reader. ...