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Re: Let's talk about Sex
wow!!!!!!!!! i didn't see any criticism of anything grammatical all through, just sentimental judgements! I think I was clear enough to the people it was intended to!
Jan 10, 2014 -
Re: Let's talk about Sex
LOL! you're saying that 'cause you're a guy, right? It's okay, Thanks any ways!
Jan 10, 2014 -
Re: Let's talk about Sex
This was written at the 'teen advice' point of view. In Africa, you have no idea how many girls get pregnant with unwanted pregnancy and the risk of STD's. This ...
Jan 10, 2014 -
Re: Let's talk about Sex
Thanks for your advice, to say the least, what's perceived was not intended but good t get the controversy going!:D
Jan 10, 2014 -
Re: Let's talk about Sex
Thanks dear!! I hope it's not too 'discouraging' *note the sarcasm*
Jan 10, 2014 -
Re: Let's talk about Sex
thank you so much, you're like the only one seeing my point. Thanks!
Jan 10, 2014 -
Re: Let's talk about Sex
hey, Thanks for your observations but i think you lack understanding of what I'm trying to convey. this piece is really different from what i usually do but it has ...
Jan 9, 2014 -
Re: The Dreamer
CFG!!!!!!! I missed you too and thank you for the review. Gosh!!!! i didn't see those mistakes, thanks for pointing them out. i would think of the word that might ...
Jan 9, 2014 -
Re: The Dreamer
Thank you!
Jan 8, 2014 -
Re: The Dreamer
Thanks so much dear!
Jan 8, 2014 -
Re: The Dreamer
wow, well, thank you.......first comment of the new year! Do me a favor and check out my other literary woks, help to review and comment, please?
Jan 6, 2014 -
Re: But Not In Love (You Get Me Goin')
This is the beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeest! I Lavh!!! I know that feeling, you like him so much, everything he does is perfect and you guys could be in love but you're not. ...
Dec 12, 2013 -
Re: a song i wrote for austin mahone
Oh, i understand, good one any way!
Dec 9, 2013 -
Re: But Love Hangs So Beautifully
One word; LOVELY! *gawks* *drools* *faints*
Dec 9, 2013 -
Re: The Truth; Her Story
thank you for the review. i always have that problem, the run-on sentences thingy, that's why there's you guys to review! i have touched it up now so please check ...
Dec 9, 2013
