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short. six sentences. very short. still, very relatable.

wow! this is beautiful. i do like how it ties to God at the end, being a christian, i can relate. the flow of the poem is very attractive. it's ...

wow!!!!! nice, i think the way you completely explained it is real. you are an awesome writer, i just followed you so follow back! LOL! keep writing, besides, i still ...

i tried using human actions to describe the word fearless! it's not really a story so i don't know how to make it better, I'd probably edit and fix mistakes. ...

oh, thanks! i will take your advice completely so look out for my other works!

OK, thank you, awesome advice, so far so much encouraging positivity, i will try working on the flaws!

very long, i have to say, you're very observant, advice taken. it is not a prologue of a book, i just wanted to put up something because i haven't since ...

hey, thanks so much! advice taken!

Lol! don't worry, we didn't notice, why don't you read my article, unprecedented? pls, thanks!

awesome. i think you have great attempts at rhyming. no use of specific or several series of figures of speech. it makes an interesting read however!

this is awesome, your precise use of scientific terms is top notch! it is a little creepy and depressing though which selects your readers but you can not have them ...