bbus

nice!

First thought: "Um, OKAY?" Great poem though, I really got a vivid image from this even though you used minimal words, so that is definitely a plus. This poem left ...

wow. nice writing, it really made me imagine the scenes in my mind. it was only slightly creepy when it said that they burned someone alive. the only question i ...

Hi, bbus here to review your amazing writing. This story was a nice one, and I like the message that it conveys a bit. The ONLY thing that I found ...

Wow man. Nice poetry, it kept me reading all the way to the end. It was actually good enough that I started wonder what was going to to happen next. ...

Nice short poem. I like that the lines were brief and did not use any more words than needed to convey the basic idea. I wonder if you could make ...

Nice poem! It really made an image of the surroundings in my mind, but later towards the end of it you really lost me. Can you try to make it ...

I found this an interesting story, and definitely a good one, but I found it very confusing and hard to follow because of the second person format it is written ...

This is an interesting story about a cold war going on between two races of people, and this story captures one of the instances in which two different ships, one ...