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Re: Warmth
Can I just say . I LOVE THIS LOVE IT. I wish people would write more like this. It's moving and motivational and has a nice rhythm and even though ...
Apr 22, 2014 -
Re: Window
This is a really sad poem showing on the lonliness you feel inside from this. I do enjoy the the rhyme scheme you put in here and the metaphors used ...
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Re: Lost in Love
Nice poem, especially when youre in conflict with yourself deciding whether to tell the guy something or not. Nice and long with descriptive words and sad at parts. I could ...
Apr 1, 2014 -
Re: Goofy
Nice piece of work here. Especially when you mention small things like the glint in his eye or the way he gets into trouble. Its descriptive, interesting, and funny all ...
Apr 1, 2014 -
Re: Paper Hearts
This is honestly my favorite poem by you. Showing how any heart you cut isnt right, but you still know how to love. This poem would, in my opinion, make ...
Apr 1, 2014 -
Re: Gracefully Forever
This is a beautiful poem and shows me how graceful you felt writing this poem. It really shows how two people dance romantically together without a care in the world. ...
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Re: Poet
This is an interesting poem, and I wish I couldve read it before. This is a nice blend of love and depression. A good point in here is the use ...
Apr 1, 2014
