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Like I told Day, this started out as a short story, then I just changed the format to look like a poem. I feel the area you quoted is a ...

The problem is, I wasn't sure if I should put this down as short story or poem. It started out a short story, but then when I ended it I ...

I don't think there is anything offensive.

I don't think there is anything offensive.

thats strict

Sorry that was an accident its a glitch I have on my laptop..... @willachilles

I am glad I could do that for you!

Hello there Aley! Ok so I think the parts after the "Pad" line made a little more sense and it was easier for me to visualize. I honestly don't really ...

Thats ok. I'm just letting you know.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!!!!! It is sad. I will change those things.

And congrats!

OK! I'll change those. I left his name out on purpose, but if you read my other story "I miss you" You will be able to find out his name. ...

At least its not rap... i hate rap. (Sorry)

HI Dustbunny! Wow. That was inspirational. I feel like this should be a song that plays everywhere. Maybe put it in lyrics, too? I don't know. With the "Don't lie ...

I honestly think that the half rhyme between geek and me is ok. It fits. What are you supposed to replace it with to make it rhyme? She smiled and ...