basia77201

Thank you very much for the awesome review! I changed all the parts with the dashes. I also changed the chunk at the bottom and un-italisized the signature. Thanks for ...

I have other works similar to this, if you'd like to read those and comment/review them! I enjoy writing such pieces. Thanks for the review!

And no problem with the duplicate!

This is not the author's story, however this person has been through plenty and was just looking for someone who cared for her even an ounce-because of this she became ...

Thank you for the review! I really enjoy writing stuff like this. You can check out my other works, which, in some aspects, are similar!

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Hello Myjaspercat! Basia77201 here with a brief review! I love this poem! I did have a couple things to nitpick at though... The last line says "the hardest part has ...

YOU? 10? HOLY COW YOU WRITE LIKE YOU ARE, LIKE, 14 OR SOMETHING. (I AM 12.) ;-)

Thank you!! I can't wait to see what you write! Let me know when you do. I will write a review! ;-) you are welcome.

But I don't want to write about the other different topics. Some stuff I agree on, and I will change certain things. This was a free writing thing. The "zero ...

Good for you!

I will rephrase those lines to make more sense. Thanks for the review!

I took out the periods. Does it look better? Sound better?

I added to the poem a little more. This is the result. Do you think it flows better?

Thanks everyone for reading and writing a comment/review!!!!

Thanks! I wanted to write this in a way that others could relate to, thats why I left out the name. Thanks for reading and leaving a review!!