barefootrunner

Pleasure! :)

That's quite interesting, since I've never seen a screenplay looking like this! Perhaps there's some discrepancy between the way they are written and printed. No worries!

You're welcome :)

Sure thing!

I didn't even see that! *face-palms* I think it would work better if I read all your pieces and then interpreted it. But great job on that too!

Thanks, Deanie :) I agree about the elipsis -- it detracts from the power of the statement! Anyway, I really appreciate the review.

Thanks, Demtry :) I really appreciate it!

Oh oh oh, and, sorry, there is no edit button, but I saw that you spelled "crate" as "create". That needs correction.

Oooooh, now I see! The root of my confusion was the word "alight". It means both on fire, and, as a verb, to stop. I thought you meant that a ...

Hey kimmybee! Great topic! I love it! Maybe we move through time facing backwards, because we can see the past behind us, but not the future in front of us. ...

Hi there! Firstly, I love it! You wrote a beautiful poem without even touching sentimentality and that is just great! The imagery is beautiful, flow is great. I feel as ...

Thank you so much for the review! I agree about the lace - it was forced. The "culprit" is in fact a fire, so the whole poem is an extended ...

YESSSS! Can't wait! I'm really excited now!

Thanks Leah! I'll check that out, but forgive me if I first write further on the story before coming back to it. I see what you mean with the rules ...