barefootrunner

Hi there! Second review from me :) Okay, so my first problem here is most certainly the grammar. In some cases, entire sentences don't make sense. You have a myriad ...

Hi there, rishabh! A quick review for a quick piece. Oh! And happy review day, by the way :) My first critique is that you start a piece with the ...

Hi there Iggy! I'll do a quick grammar shred and commentary for you :) Spelling and Grammar: It makes its ascend over the factories, bounces its rays off the metal ...

Hi there and another review as promised! You're really doing great :) Right, things are going with a bang, as usual! I'm really starting to get used to the fact ...

Hi there! Great to see this moving on :) I've been looking forward to it! Okay, so my first thought was that this is slightly less Harry Potter and way ...

Hi there! A great welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it here :) My first point is just that you need to replace many of your commas here with ...

Hi there and welcome to YWS! It's great here, isn't it? So, my first piece of critique is on your format. Don't center the text and have a clear distinction ...

Hi there :) I'm here for a quick review of your work. Okay, so for spelling and grammar: You're writing a deep sort of piece here, and you want your ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS and enjoy the site :) So, to the review! I found this poem very simplistic and abstract by nature, which was quite refreshing. However, your ...

Hi there! A quick review for you :) Okay, so you have a couple of issues with dialogue, so you can check out the Knowledge Base—they have some really good ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS :) Okay, I've got a quick pick on your work. Lots of small grammar errors in here: Now, usually I’m not the one to complain ...

Hi there! Belated welcome to YWS :) Firstly, this was great in its utter irony! I really enjoyed your work :) Okay, a couple of quick picks: Variables: Not every ...

Hi there! A short review for a short work. Welcome to YWS! It's a very special place :) Okay, so on to the review. You have a lot of small ...

Hi there! I'm not a regular lyrics reviewer, but this really caught my attention and kept it! So I think a few quick comments are in order. I really love ...

Hi there! A quick review :) Admittedly, I have very little critique on the characterization, plot and all the things that count. Here is the sum total of what I ...