barefootrunner

Hi there, BlackNether. Okay, the master reviewer is about to be reviewed :D So, my first thought when I got to this piece, was 'RHYME!' There is a lot of ...

Hi there! barefootrunner here to review your poem! Title: Good. It somehow reminds me of this poem: (Yup, too lazy to stick it in an URL.) It also shouts racial ...

Hi there! barefootrunner here to review :) Happy review day and may the Tsunamis triumph! Okay, firstly spelling and grammar: Your second line contains two spelling errors: who's should be ...

Hi there! barefootrunner here to review :) I really appreciated this. What a grammar detox! Thank you for writing so cleanly. Okay, as for critique, I don't really have any... ...

Hi there! barefootrunner here to review again! I enjoyed this piece too. The spelling and grammar was slightly less good than before — you had more typos. Just read it ...

Hi there! barefootrunner to review your piece :) I see you around the SBs quite often, but less hereabouts. In any case, on to the review! I enjoyed reading this. ...

Hi there! barefootrunner here to review :) Happy review day and may the Tsunami Tyrants triumph! Firstly, your spelling and grammar is fair, but I managed to find some nitpicks ...

Hi there, Catnip :) Welcome to YWS and well done on your review record! barefootrunner here to review you for a change! Okay, your poem is like a shape shifter. ...

Hi there! barefootrunner here to review :) Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here! Okay, firstly, a haiku only has one 575 pattern, not three like you ...

Hi there! barefoot here to review! Yup, I've come again. So this piece needs more work than Cities. The style of this one reminds me more of ee cummings. It ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! barefoot here to review :) Firstly... I loved this! It is so utterly beautiful and it is so spectacularly visual! Let others wrangle — I ...

Hi there! barefootrunner here to review :) Okay, so first impressions: a very deep message for whoever reads this. Also, what on earth is parathesis? The only thing called parathesis ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS and may you enjoy your time on the site :) barefootrunner here to review. Firstly, if you had put this in the Lyrics category, I ...

Hi there! barefootrunner to review! Firstly, a warm welcome to our community. Welcome to YWS and feel free to ask me or anyone else about anything :) What a grammar ...

Hi there! barefootrunner to review. Welcome to YWS! I hope you really enjoy your time here and get to grow as a writer. Since your piece is so short, I'll ...