barefootrunner

Hey there! Well, you know me and I know you I guess, so let's get stuck in. In terms of grammar, this section has a massive amount of comma splices. ...

Hey shaniac! barefoot here with a friendly review. Let me start by saying that I enjoyed reading this and liked the atmosphere you created with the tone and style of ...

Hey Dreamworx! I really liked this piece! I haven't read the rest of the story but I really enjoyed the writing style, the plot movement, the characterization, setting, pace and ...

Hey FW76! I haven't seen you around in the forums, but I see you've been here a while already. In any case, a late welcome to YWS! I can be ...

Hey Nafa! barefoot here with another review. As always, please feel free to engage with me about any of my commentary! I'm not always right, and I'm not always soft ...

Hey there! barefoot here with a review for you on this lovely review day. Please feel free to chat with me about any of my commentary. Let's start by saying ...

Hey there elysian! Here's your review, as requested. I see Shadow has already been going at the grammar, so I'll just summarize what I'm seeing: a good deal of run-on ...

Hey there! barefoot here to review your short story. I really enjoyed the story and found it fun and thought-provoking. I particularly liked thinking about the kind of changes Paula ...

Hey there Quinine! It's me again. I can see that this piece has a lot in common with Twilight. There is a distinct style here, something I appreciate. I enjoyed ...

Hey there, Quinine! I like your name. Incidentally, are you from a malaria area? So, to the review! This poem is sweet and beautiful. What a scene! I can actually ...

Hey there camusic! I hope you're enjoying YWS and everything it has to offer. I can see this is a work in progress, and I'm sure you will know most ...

Hey there! Your second chapter has been a really cool read! I really love Sebastian as a character and the content here was more potent and dynamic than what I ...

Hey there! I really love the alternative spin you've put on a post-death world. It leaves me with a good deal of curiosity and is a good hook into the ...

Hi there! Another late review! You really should post these on my wall so that I don't miss them :D This is what I've been looking for! That bit of ...

Hi there! Welcome to your review! I'll jump straight into a text analysis. On the third day, Iada came down for breakfast and noticed someone laying on the couch in ...