bandgeek101

Hi, this is Bandgeek with a review! nThis was a great poem, with great rhymes and rhythm. I liked the topic,it was great. You had great figurative language, but try ...

This was really good, I loved the poem. The only thing that bothered me a bit was your format. I thin the poem would flow better with four lines in ...

This was a great love poem, but I think it needs a bit more substance, like how much the guy she loves really means to her. Overall, it flowed pretty ...

This was beautiful. Really, I'm happy that you found who you really WERE and the simplicity of it was amazing. I can't really bring myself to review this.

Thanks for the review! I loved the input!

Amazing. You really had lots of attention grabbers and made me wonder about who "she" is. I especially loved the last sentence, "Make sure she comes back alive this time." ...

That was so beautiful, I made me want to cry,

No problem! It really was an amazing poem!

Thanks, I'll check my punctuation, I always forget about that in poems.

Thanks, I ALWAYS have trouble with my tenses! :)

Thanks! I never thought of adding punctuation before, great idea!

Thanks! I'll keep that in mind.