bailecielo

Hey Adna! :D That was beautiful! The first time I read it, I couldn't quite understand the significance of these lines: A kitten purr, a hyena cackle, An opera soprano’s ...

Wow! Heavy political aggressiveness. Surely there are some things they get right!? :P We'll need every bit of ideology to make the world a better place! :D But then again, ...

Clearly made for Darcy! :D If he reads this, there's no doubt he's going to fall head over heels for you! :D haha! This piece really moved me! Made me ...

One word. WOW! :D That was awesome bf! :D I LOVED that it has a social impact. It's the kind that gets people thinking about life! You're right. We're all ...

Just a lot of typos and misspelled words, dear. You should be a bit more careful. :D The loss of what could have been Like northe r n lights no ...

Here's the thing with Paulo Coehlo... people adore him, people hate him. I think it's because his works are simply not for everyone. People ought to read his books if ...

I haven't read [or written] a couplet in a LONG time, and this made up for it. :] I love the rhymes, and as i read on, the rhythm [at ...

BF! I just LOVE this!!! Common thought between us again - women falling for a man's trickery, being merely objects of fascinations they chase and hurt over and over again! ...

I'm a little lost! You mean to say you saw a fairy?! :D Well, that's what it seems like. Anyway, I think there are a few things you might wanna ...

Oh my gosh! I have an unfinished poem entitled Mirror too! :[ Of course, it has a flair of vanity, although it's mostly about a girl who seemingly finds a ...

Silken chants I can't deny, Chanted silks I can't defy, Come to us who call to thee, Come to us, come to me. I'm loving the first lines! Good opening! ...

It's sad how everyone's obsessing about being a size 0! I love that you talked about something a lot of girls can relate to. Regarding the poem, I can't say ...

Hi there! :D I was almost going to comment that i find the usage of words very informal. But thanks to "Mars", now i get it! :) It definitely sounded ...

Hey bf! :D Beautiful, well-written, and sweet! :D But i agree that you must simply add more! :D Ahem. Do i know who this one's for? :D *giggles* I'd love ...

I love it. Smart but not overbearing. I especially adore the first line: ink to your paper -- like astrology to our night I like the depth in your words ...