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Hey Dragongirl!backroads here to review! First off, this is a fantastic story! They way you have your characters interact really brings them to life, and the entire mess Griffin's mom ...

Hey Lightsong, it's backroads here to review! Ok so these later chapters have a much nicer flow! I really enjoyed reading them, and I could get a better sense of ...

Hey Fantasy14, backroads here to review! I haven't written anything along the lines of this, but Sci-Fi is one of my favorite reads! I love the concept you've set up, ...

Hey molly! backroads here to review! I absolutely love your description! it is incredibly vivid- I can picture the entire setting! And the way your characters act and talk to ...

hey tomato18, backroads here to write a review! You have a really interesting here! I like how you've set up the plot, and love how your characters talk and interact ...

Hey tgirly! backroads here to write a review! I really hope you get that scholarship!!! You have quite the knack for detail! You piece was incredibly descriptive, and I particularly ...

Hey val, backroads here to review! I really like your story, the ending is definitely creepy! I noticed the same thing as sabyemerald, there were a lot of punctual errors. ...

Hi Lydia1995, backroadstraveler here to review! Wow, fantastic work! Your chapter is very descriptive and well written, the details you convey make such a clear picture in my head- whether ...

Hey SageYay! backroadstraveler here to review! I love the story you have going here! It's uplifting and inspiring- I particularly love how you have Gabe and Lacie looking for Sam ...

Hey LadyEvvy! backroads Here to review! Once more you've added to the mystery of the school! I keep asking myself how this building works and can't wait to find out ...

Hey DreamYourselfAway! Backroadstraveler here to review! You've got a ton of content here and a super cool idea! However, I'm going to stick a little more to general tips/suggestions that ...

Hey acm! I'm here to review! First off, oh my goodness! This is so sweet- and having moved not too long ago I can totally relate to what you've written. ...

LOL I loved the twist! You really had me going! Just a few comments, mostly I would try to draw out the emotions the narrator is feeling. When you write ...