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Hey Lightsong, Happy Review Day! I love where you're taking the plot and how you're progressing through this story! With each chapter we get a new glimpse as to just ...

Hey there! Sorry its been so long since I've reviewed your work! I gotta say, I was NOT expecting that twist at all. This school gets stranger by the minute, ...

Hey Pancakes, backroads here to review! I've seen a lot of these lists for high school, so I was interested by the idea of a list for elementary school! You've ...

Hey Nilla, welcome to YWS! backroads here to review! Just or the record, I did go back and read you first chapter before reviewing. LMK if you'd like me to ...

Hi GreenTulip, backroads here for a review! This looks like a great start to an interesting story! The way you set up the chapter with Maivene really draws the reader ...

Hi gabbi, backroads here to writer a review! I love this short! The way you parcel out details of Lilian's life and of what she had with her dad is ...

Hey there! backroads here to write a review! You have a really interesting concept here! I like the new take on the vampire-romance, and think it's sweet that James has ...

Hi J1ya, backroads here to review! I love your poem here! I can totally relate to this frustration- I had a hard time getting back into writing after taking way ...

Hi null, backroads here! I don't typically review poetry but I'm here to give it my best shot! I love this poem, it is very haunting, and (noting that you ...

It's me again! The beginning part when Merah was scared for Scarlet and the lights was incredibly sweet and moving! I really liked that part, though I would comment on ...

Hey lightsong! Interesting plot development, can't wait to see what happens next! A few things got confusing, Carlito put a ton of comments down so I'm sorry if I'm reiterating ...

Hey there!! backroads here to write a review!! This is a very well-written section! I can really picture Megan's surprise at Kathryn's transformation, even though these characters were just introduced

Hey Lightsong! It's backroads again, I'm here to review!! Again, the entire chapter has a much nicer flow than before! Your characters really seem to come to life, and I ...

Hey Chrissy, backroads here to review as promised! You have a really cool concept here, and I like the twist at the end! The detail is quite vivid- all in ...

Hey burninhell, backroads here to write a review! First off, let me just say that you have incredibly vivid detail! The little girl totally gave me the creeps! I have ...