babymagic18

I greatly appreciate your opinion. : )

I greatly appreciate your opinion. : )

This was actually pretty amusing. I liked the voice of it, I wasn't distracted. The title was a good one as well. I'm no poetry expert but I'd give this ...

So this was interesting. Very different. I can't say I found anything negative or poor about this piece. You went with one idea and stayed on track with it. It ...

You're right I don't understand it but the fact that you got it off your mind is the most important detail. Every person needs to know that they can let ...

I liked this I really did it sounded genuine. Your title really drew me to this piece so thats really good. Love hurts and I like the way you protrayed ...

Very nicely written I must say. Your words flowed and weren't a mess so the piece really worked. Keep writing you really are good.

I don't mean to sound rude but honestly this sounds like you took this from somewhere. I swear I have heard a story just like this before in a childrens ...

This was really something I'm gald I cane across it. Kepp it up this was a really nice piece.

Good but you need to be careful of capitalization it tends to need some work I liked it though. I really can't say anything negative or helpful b/c it would ...

This was good whenever I try to put words together it usually winds up a mess and I have to start over. Yours is well written a little on the ...

Although I found this poem good. I dear say beginning and last need to separate and there should be a new start at last. What i'm saying if you don't ...

I have never read a piece that describes the wolf the way you do it was dark in my opinion but honestly very good. The ending kind of confused me ...

Very well done it really told a story as with other poems i read i have no idea what they are talking about so way to go. keep it up ...

you have really given me new ideas for more poems so i thank you!