babydollblues

First off, thank you! Second off, I was actually wondering how to make the speaker of the dialogue clear, I thought I somewhat solved it with 'glaring at me straight ...

The concept of your poem is very good, but the execution of it could have been carried out a bit better. I like the two first sentences together, they're not ...

I love this from the bottom of my heart! The poem itself is so incredibly heartwarming and it really makes you feel like you, yourself are the lover. And you ...

Thank you, that is exactly what I wanted to convey! I agree that my poem could be a bit stronger at the end and I'll probably edit it someday.

Thank you! I was thinking the same thing with the stanzas but wasn't sure if I should change it or not, thanks for the advice! omg thank you, i would ...

I really connected with this and the way you wrote this was almost innocent in a sense, which is a very good thing since the poem is told from a ...

I love the way you formatted this poem, it fits very well with it.