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Darn. I hate how you always make me feel uncomfortable when I read anything of yours! That's a really powerful skill... I especially like the last stanza, because what you ...

Hi! About the comment above, I loved your first chapter so DONT CHANGE IT! It makes it very unique~ Also, this chapter was a bit more into reality. The only ...

Wait...I didn't get the pun either T.T Is it because you ate everything? You must explain this in depth to me! :) Please? Also, fantastic way to get people to ...

Okay, warning, this is going to be as I'm reading so I might sound dumb! First of all, who is this brother??? I'm so curious, and how is he related? ...

Hi! Just found this digging through your old stuff. I guess the first thought was wow. It reminded me of inception (did you watch this movie?) and not only because ...

Arggh, I keep telling myself not to comment on poetry, but whenever I see your poems, they're so bloody brilliant I can't not write a comment however ignorant it turns ...

I think my favorite line in the story was this one: Prescott Academy looked very clean cut. It looked so amazing that it didn't look like it was meant to ...

Hi! I think you did a real neat job with the chapter name - that's what attracted me first. And, you have a lot of action going on in just ...

Hi! I don't like to comment on poems because I can't offer anything helpful! >.< I just want to say that the last line was heart-breaking, and that if that ...

Hi! This piece was great! And I agree with the person above me, the aspect that most stood out about this story was it's future tense. Since you write everything ...

Hi! It's always cool to see essays uploaded here. I'll just get though the nitpicky details and then get to the good part! It started when the caveman had to ...

Hi! I'm going to be honest, I read your poem 3 times and still didn't quite grasp it. BUT don't worry, poetry has never been my strong point! (So it's ...

You know I'm going to pester you about this! :) You also know I'm dumb and so I'm probably going to make you spell every word out for me later. ...

I'm sorry, every time you mentioned "taking his shirt off" images of Taylor Lautner kept sweeping through my mind! :) Well written and creative, I do believe this is the ...

Hey! So, the title was particular eye-catching, good job with that! (I saw afterwards that it was indeed your work) Anywayz, onto the comments! I feel that you really draw ...