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  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: the_highschoolparty

    Hi! Ayelen here! I loved the middle to end bits where I could really feel the nausea and dizziness. I'm a little lost on when your character ingests the drugs, ...

    Jul 31, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: spring break

    Feb 12, 2022
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Stormy Skies

    Thank you so much for your review!! I always appreciate when people catch my grammar mistakes :) I'll fix it right away!

    Mar 26, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Stormy Skies

    I am so glad you enjoyed this! About the texts, I had edited and republished the story yesterday fixing that. I did not expect this story to get such a ...

    Mar 24, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Stormy Skies

    Thanks for your review!

    Mar 23, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: onion layers

    ogres have lAYERS DONKÄE

    Mar 23, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Stormy Skies

    I'm so glad this resonated with you. :) That made my day. I am so glad you like it!

    Mar 23, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Stormy Skies

    Thank you so much for the review! I will probably edit it soon and I appreciate your critiques very much.

    Mar 22, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: Ghosted [Chapter 1.2]

    OHH I love that too! I had a feeling :) I love this plot I must see their friendship progress /0o0/ so excited

    Feb 23, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: Ghosted [Chapter 1.1]

    Oh I love it! I'm sorry, I can't write good reviews, so I won't, but... this is a seriously good story !

    Feb 23, 2021
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Romantic Re: Amber Sounds

    This is so nice! I love the personification of the house. The descriptions were on point and super great. And the feelings you describe leave you like, House IM NEVER ...

    Feb 21, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: Ghosted [Prologue]

    OH my god keep posting i am seriously invested in this now! This seems so good and your writing is so smooth and it reads professionally! :0

    Feb 21, 2021
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Never the same

    This is so good! I love the style of writing. It kept me reading, and I loved the last paragraph. Very eerie!!

    Feb 21, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: It was just too loud

    this is so powerful it really grasps the hopelessness and the pain that comes with losing a loved one. The way you wrote this made my heart skip a beat

    Feb 20, 2021


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