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Re: the_highschoolparty
Hi! Ayelen here! I loved the middle to end bits where I could really feel the nausea and dizziness. I'm a little lost on when your character ingests the drugs, ...
Jul 31, 2023 - Re: spring break Feb 12, 2022
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Re: Stormy Skies
Thank you so much for your review!! I always appreciate when people catch my grammar mistakes :) I'll fix it right away!
Mar 26, 2021 -
Re: Stormy Skies
I am so glad you enjoyed this! About the texts, I had edited and republished the story yesterday fixing that. I did not expect this story to get such a ...
Mar 24, 2021 -
Re: Stormy Skies
Thanks for your review!
Mar 23, 2021 -
Re: onion layers
ogres have lAYERS DONKÄE
Mar 23, 2021 -
Re: Stormy Skies
I'm so glad this resonated with you. :) That made my day. I am so glad you like it!
Mar 23, 2021 -
Re: Stormy Skies
Thank you so much for the review! I will probably edit it soon and I appreciate your critiques very much.
Mar 22, 2021 -
Re: Ghosted [Chapter 1.2]
OHH I love that too! I had a feeling :) I love this plot I must see their friendship progress /0o0/ so excited
Feb 23, 2021 -
Re: Ghosted [Chapter 1.1]
Oh I love it! I'm sorry, I can't write good reviews, so I won't, but... this is a seriously good story !
Feb 23, 2021 -
Re: Amber Sounds
This is so nice! I love the personification of the house. The descriptions were on point and super great. And the feelings you describe leave you like, House IM NEVER ...
Feb 21, 2021 -
Re: Ghosted [Prologue]
OH my god keep posting i am seriously invested in this now! This seems so good and your writing is so smooth and it reads professionally! :0
Feb 21, 2021 -
Re: Never the same
This is so good! I love the style of writing. It kept me reading, and I loved the last paragraph. Very eerie!!
Feb 21, 2021 -
Re: It was just too loud
this is so powerful it really grasps the hopelessness and the pain that comes with losing a loved one. The way you wrote this made my heart skip a beat
Feb 20, 2021
