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The earth rumbles and cracks beneath my feet Then a thrusting force knocks me to the ground A tremendous quake I cannot defeat No escape the monster is all around ...

Ha ha, good work, you got a lot of reviews for this one.... I say yes, keep writing. looking forward to hearing more. I know why you did this, I ...

If you want this to be a chapter, then you need to make it a LOT longer. I like the idea though... and I can kind see where this is ...

Hi, I'm sorry about this, but I was doing a proper review, then my computer crashed while I was 1/2 way through, so I'll just give you the brief. The ...

Sim 1: Oh well. I'll be fired from my job which I have worked for about five months, without a single promotion, because I couldn't make any friends due to ...

Hi, looks like I get to review! And right now, you are in the Shiyru infirmary abbreviate it, nobody talks like that anymore Quile looked like he was crying but ...

This is the review the you asked for... Just some small mistakes I found, first up... “Oh, Maggie.” sneered Alison. "Clumsy, clumsy Maggie. Would you like a hand?” she asked ...

As the detective ended a day of tough work she received a phone call. “Detective Johnson come here quickly there’s been a murder” said the shaky voice of her assistant ...

Wait, Nate, nathan & Nathaniel? don't you think that it's going to get too confusing? and what about the principle, wasn't his name Jared too, aswell as the senior guy? ...

WOW, I know how she feels. I absolutely hate shopping! its the most annoying thing, and i have a sister, who is an absolute shopaholic. (who could imagine a weirder ...

Imagine a lonely child, the kind who didn’t have any friends in school. When most children would know how to play a simple game of hopscotch by then, she wouldn’t. ...

H, I just found myself noticing the lack of emotion and descriptiveness. It was a good story, and it had a well defined plot, but I think it was more ...

OMGOMG!!! please, hurry up and write the next one! I cant wait! PM me !!!! *gives third gold star* you are so going to be a world renowned author one ...

Cool, I want more... gimmegimmegimme, I'll read the next part now, but just so you know, that was amazing! i can't really see it being a chapter though... i think ...

WOW, sorry to quote all of the others, but you have talent! really, you should keep on going with this! Can you PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE PM me when the next part is ...