astutedude

Alright, alright, I see you Mr. "TakeThatYouFiend". You're talented and you communicate well but allow me to point out a couple of my peeves within your work: In the first ...

This rocks my world, especially this part: The American people will still have no idea about Liberia and the man who killed 20,000 people the same man who ate little ...

YES! I do like it. In fact you could say I have fallen for it. To be completely honest I thought this would be another try-hard romantic poem but it ...

Raw power. Inspired this: Distrusted and disliked, Downtrodden and distraught, Trying to make a change, It all amounts to naught, No matter what I feel, I tend to always fall, ...

Immature as all hell but you knew it. "A/N: I know this is really immature, but I woke up with it in my head. Also, "There once was a man ...

I have said this before and I will say it again; writing is an art. Art doesn't have to be perfect but it does have to be strong. Including the ...

Writing is an art. Art doesn't have to be perfect but it does have to be strong. Including the following weakened your writing: "[authors note] sorry for the obvious unintended ...

When a person has gifts such as yours two things tend to happen. Society attempts to crush the fiber of that person's spirit so much that they cease to exist, ...