ashleymreid

Ashley here given a review. First off, i want to let you know i only read the first-half.Only because this post is very long,and I would recommend breaking the post ...

Hello, Ashleymreid here to give a start off i love writers who pick character out of the norm with a diverse background. i just wish i had read the earlier ...

Hello Ashleymreid for a review. interesting read just have a few suggestions. The paragraphs are packed with would help if you broke some of that information writers we try to ...

Hello! ashleymreid here giving a review. and i found it to be a good read mainly because is was a short excerpt,making it easier to critique the story. i do ...

1) your poem/novel- began kinda odd to me,the first sentence needs a little reviewing.overall is is a great start if you are evolving this poem into a potential novel. i'm ...

1) this looks like a great start to a great story so i applaud your prologue. i just wish i knew more about why these "different humans" were faster then ...

The start of you novel is a very good concept, and very good start. but i do see some description issue and a few grammatical. 1) when you were describing ...

This was very good and i wish there was more to read.You can since and picture this scene in your head with your character standing there panting over the girl ...

This is decent work and I'm not a big fan of poetry but I wanted to see what it was all about due to the is a piece that can ...