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Rosey, I'm excited to read your work because I haven't yet =] Karen looked out the airplane window as they landed. The grass was covered by a pitiful amount of ...

This was a really different story line. At first, I was like freaking out because I totally did not want Maria going with this guy. He sounds like a rapist ...

Yeah, this was super good. I'll be in Lauren's place in less than a year, and I can totally relate to the time thing. It seems to be flying by ...

This was super cute! I love how it wasn't like one of those romances where they kiss and it's like fireworks exploding and such. It was just plain and simple ...

Nic, I highly doubt that this is your worst. So far, none of them have been dreadful so I have high expectations, as I usually do, of your stories :D ...

Hey, Bri! I always get so revved up when I hear you pos another story. Like everyone says above, you always start stories with so much potential. You just must ...

Hola, Sunny! What made it even worse was when Jack called his landlady “Miss Dominique”. It turned out to be a mistake because “Miss Dominique” then insisted that he call ...

Hey, Sunny. Since I’m taking my sweet time with the chapters you sent me, I decided to do a critique of the ones you have on the site just so ...

I sighed and shoved the front door open fully. Wow, how can she be so calm about this? I would be going crazy with desire and disgust at myself… Really ...

Hey, Nic! Gosh, I am horrible, aren’t I? So behind on critiques, it isn’t even funny… :? I apologize for that. Hopefully when I catch up on all that I’ve ...

Wow, intense. More than intense, that is. You really were telling the truth when you said this was raw... But I liked it. It was a different approach than what ...

Hello, Katie! First things first, I am one huge sucker for romances like this so thumbs-up to you for making me smile. However, there were many, and might I add ...

Hey, Sunny! I saw this and immediately caught my attention. Have you read the book Ophelia ? It's from her perspective. Very good, I recommend it :wink: The fear of ...

Wow, Luc, I’m sorry that I haven’t read this yet. I’ve been so bad with reviews lately. But here I am. Hopefully it is some help to you. Slowly, she ...

Hey, Sorsha =] Gosh, when I heard about you sending this to an agent, I got really excited for you! I really hope it works out for you! Christ she ...