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Oooo, Captain James Bentley is one of the suitors, isn't he? I just know it! :D Gosh, I really am liking this story! “Thank You.” Miss Sophia said to the ...

I love the rewrite, Merry! You included so much more stuff and the pace was perfect! Bravo to you! :D “It also says that you will move in with your ...

Okay, I just got done correcting your full Chapter One, and when I signed in to YWS and saw that you had it broken up, I was like “No!” hehe ...

Ooooohhhh, Merry! Right after that last line about the three suitors, I got goosebumps and I just knew this would be good story :D Throughout the evening, the Selwood household ...

This was good, day_tripper. But I must be honest and say that you didn't include as much info as I would have liked. You never really gave us a chance ...

Sworddance, this was brilliant. No lie. I loved every minute of it. I see that Esme got here before me but I guess I still have a few things to ...

Yeah, I agree with Jennafina. This book made such a big impact on my life. I guess when ever we talked about the Holocaust and I looked at it just ...

Wow, I really enjoyed this. So real. I mean, you caught your MC's emotions perfectly. I mean, it was immaculate, the way you did it. So Bravo to you! :D ...

Again, good, Beautyandthefish! hehe I just can't get enough of your name :D But anyway, I do have a few things to point out: 1. Age Difference. I'm guessing that ...

Hello, Beautyandthefish! Cute name by the way :wink: About your story, I thought it was good. I mean, you had nothing insanely wrong with it. Everything was in order and ...

Hey, Jamie! I’m back! :D And I must say this is improving A LOT. Every time I read it, I get more and more attached to it! Brad couldn't believe ...

I liked it, Merry. However, I found it kind of hard to follow at some parts for some reason…I think it was your pace. You moved pretty fast through some ...

All I did was copy/paste. Corrections are in bold. Mary rested her head on her hands and gazed out the car window, thinking about Trey, and trying to ignore her ...

Kelsey, oh Kelsey...will you ever stop making chapters so darn ended and I was like "More!" But I guess I will have to wait like the rest of YWS for ...

Amazing, BigBadBear, absolutely amazing. Those ending words...chills, I had, chills. It was really quite sad that you said Mary was buried and forgotten about. :( And how Christian and Cristy-Ann ...