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Hey, Angel! Sorry it took me so long to get to this but I'm here, and ready to reveiw! :D Hopefully I am of some help :wink: If Love is ...

This chapter is my favorite out of the ones I have reviewed today :wink: Very intense ending. :D The only thing I found confusing was this part: As dreams comes ...

Well, this chapter I felt was more developed than your other ones, you had more elements and such, but the way that Hailey just left Harper after that news was ...

Oh wow...that's such a tough and sorrowful subject. I mean, that must have been hard on her and she must have had a lot of guts, telling Hailey that when ...

This chapter was good...but I felt like it was kind of missing something. Yes, this needed to be included, but when I read the info from beneath the title, I ...

Here is the next chapter. It isn't very long and may be a little rough. Any harsh critiques are always welcome and I hope you enjoy it!! I'll do the ...

I kept this short, because shorter pieces generally lead to more reviews. So I hope you like what there is. If I have enough positive feedback, I'll probably continue... Kels, ...

Cheryl sat on the couch, the worn and ancient book open before her. Her hands trembled as she turned the pages, searching for one certain phrase. It was a thing ...

If Love is not Enough By Angel of Death Chapter 1 October 3, 2007 Izzy stared at the front desk, her eyes mirroring the face of the librarian. I blushed ...

Hey, King! Saw that you posted another chapter and couldn't resist rushing over to read :D Hopefully this helps :wink: Chapter 3: Vampire The scratching starts again, this time right ...

Yes, for sure now I see that she is living with her Grandma from now on. :wink: It took me a couple of chapters, but I got it hehe Umm, ...

Okay, now I see that she is moving in permantently, right? Hopefully that clears up as I read on :wink: I really found no mistakes again. Your flow and everything ...

This is a cute exchange between grandmother and granddaughter...but I feel like I'm missing something...? In the first part of this, you say her parents are going on a cruise. ...

I must agree with Bri here, this was very deep, Merry :D I can tell that you learned from your last verse story and changed it here. It flowed so ...

As much as I hated school, I hated going home even more. School was my escape from the horrors that [s]waited for me at my house[/s] awaited me there . ...