Until The End-Part 2

by Merry_Haven

Published October 21, 2008

~Here's part two, Enjoy! :D ~

Part 2

Other House

Grandma Essie lives in a small neighborhood

that seems to be on a private road. Grabbing my

luggage, I look at the other houses. Except one

stands out within the others. The next door house

looks very Victorian.

I could tell that there is a family who lives

next door. A white wrap around porch and

swinging bench for moonlit nights. Baby blue

shutters for the warm spring, colorful hanging

plants and a yard full of gorgeous flowers. I

should definitely make my self known to the

neighbors.

New Room

Walking into my new room, I see a

twin sized bed. I smile, as I look at the colors

of the comforters. Green and black. My favorite.

There are about a half a dozen pillows and a

chest at the end.

Unpacking my belongings, I scan the room for

other discoveries. Glancing at the desk, I see a

laptop. Rushing over, I see a note that says...

-To Hailey from Grandma Essie.

“Thanks.” As I whispered to myself, knowing

it was for her.

Afterwards I placed my clothes in the

mahogany colored dresser. “Huh,” Sighing

at my pasty white walls, I thought what I would do.

Maybe I should paint them, or tape up some posters.

Only time will tell...

Comments & reviews · 3
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lucyy
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lucyy wrote a review Review · Oct 30, 2008

Wow, another great chapter - there really is no other word I can think of using - you'vce rendered me speachless (: I loved how you described the neighbour's house - awesome imagery :D Off to part three ...

--Lucyy xx

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ashleylee wrote a review Review · Oct 26, 2008

Okay, now I see that she is moving in permantently, right? Hopefully that clears up as I read on :wink:

I really found no mistakes again. Your flow and everything is just perfect. I woud try to rewrite the beginning a little, though, because it was kind of rough, with the Victorian and all.

Other than that, good job! :D

*on to part three*



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