artybirdy

Happy Review Day! Just to inform you, I haven’t read the previous chapters and, hence, this review will only be based on this one. Nitpicks: My mind had just been ...

Happy Review Day! I haven't read your earlier chapters and, hence, my review will only be focused on this one. "I thought it was a heart attack or a stroke, ...

Happy Review Day! I think it was interesting to read her reflection over her life. It’s always fascinating to read how experiences of the past shape people’s present, and I ...

Hiya! Happy Review Day. They pray on the weak and naïve. I think you meant “prey” instead of “pray”. The introduction felt like it’s opinion-based. Unless it’s from one of ...

Cliché but sweet! You based your story on a quote and the meaning of it was reflected nicely. “Wow, Landon, that was so funny! I’m literally dying right now.” Was ...

Happy Review Day! “You best be careful now, boy! There been some talkin’ ‘bout the shadows!” Slowly, the man turned around to stare at the woman. “The shadows,” he repeated ...

Nitpicks: In this part of the county, heat ment a day off. It should be “meant.” Years ago, on a day like today, the farm would've be buzzing with family. ...

I could relate to this poem because I have experienced the challenge you have highlighted in there. Though, unlike the girl you talk about, I usually end up giving up. ...

Hiya! I'm here for a quick review. If the story's set in 2020, then manual labour would be replaced with automation. The family can't afford that as they are poor. ...

I can help you. Instead of that, try: In any case, I can help you. This is because you listed the reasons why we’re reading your guide and it’s sort ...

There’s a strong sense of self-loathe from Kasimir, and it’s made me curious about what he’s done. Did he kill an innocent person, a child maybe? That’s a great cliff-hanger ...

Hiya! I'm here to review. “LOOK AT WHAT YOU FUCKIN’ DID! YOU BROKE THE BOWL YOU LITTLE SHIT! HOW THE FUCK ARE YOU PICK THAT UP?! HOW THE HELL AM ...

Cassius Clay as in Muhammad Ali? He’s better known as his latter name. I think you should replace it, so your readers know the narrator’s comparing Amy against him. To ...

I’ve never been a fan of Historical Fiction because the abundance of descriptions in those books bore me. However, your blurb pulled me in. It’s simple and, yet, has captured ...

To be honest, the ending scared me. I struggled to sleep last night because I made a stupid mistake of reading this just before I went to bed. Your descriptions ...