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First off, I loved how you opened up the piece. I personally find it difficult to start a piece that it's the middle of a scene without a slew of ...

Hey Dustbunny14, just got to this tonight after work. Thank you again for linking me to this story. :) “Ow, geez!” yelped Connor, he shoved his scissors back in his ...

I really like the concept of this piece. It's cute and humorous, which is what I assumed you were going after. Just because I've been typing so many papers lately, ...

Sorry this took so long! Even though I have some free time right now, it's not enough to cover a large piece like the one you've posted, so I'll be ...

I like this quite a bit. A few things first before I get onto the the stuff you requested. Quiet now and here hear my rhyme of things long gone, ...

This is seriously a really good piece. I don't find a lot of pieces like these on here, or anywhere really. I love the point of view you had with ...

Very interesting first chapter. I will admit, it was a little tough getting into it at the beginning, but once I got past the first few paragraphs, it was a ...

I can see this as something I would be following on here. I like where you're going with this. Just some stuff to point out. “The Earth has been here ...

I don't really have a lot to say about this one other than the usual "love almost everything about it" bit, so I'll just keep this one short. (minus the ...

As usual, fabulous job. So this one, I'm going to try and make it as concise as possible with all the Spell Checking I can do. xD So, ones without ...

I like how you did the whole art marketing background with Alison; it tells us a little more about her, as well as gives you kind of a fall back ...

I want to say, first and foremost, how much I adore the realism in this piece. Derrick, Jerome, and Alison are wonderfully written, and I'm sure you'll reveal more about ...

I want to say first and foremost, this is a pretty unique plot. I like how direct it's written, and how it keeps moving, but there are some parts that ...

I thought that this would be an interesting read. I was wrong. This is AMAZING. These are the kind of stories in the Realistic Fiction genre that are actually read-worthy, ...

Okay, let me first say that I absolutely love you for not only reading Airborn, but for writing a fanfiction story about it! The Challenger sailed silently over the south ...